Added on 4 October 2026 (docs/research/nasir-khusraw-scope.md, §2): the reader's first text by Nāṣir-i Khusraw and its second continuous Persian verse, built exactly as ʿAṭṭār's Manṭiq al-ṭayr (docs/texts/mantiq-tayr.md). The selection is the poem's cosmological core.
| Work / author / dates | Rawshanāʾī-nāma (the verse masnavī, not the prose Shish faṣl also so called), Nāṣir-i Khusraw (b. 394/1004, d. after 465/1073); about 590 couplets; dated 444/1053 by Ivanow from a Chitral MS [REPORTED] |
| Part added | 184 couplets, Ethé's numbering: vv. 163–327 (Kāviyānī pp. 11–21: God's oneness, sayings on oneness, the Universal Intellect and Soul, the spheres, the elements and the three kingdoms, the making of the human being, his nobility, the return, substance and accident, the senses, human perfection, the ranks of lack and perfection) and vv. 339–357 (pp. 22–23: knowing the soul). The scope note asked for pp. 11–20 + 22; the two sections that run over a page (vv. 319–327 on p. 21, vv. 354–357 on p. 23) are completed rather than cut mid-section. vv. 328–338 (dar ʿawāmm al-nās) are left out, as planned. |
| Reader route | /read/rawshanai-nama · about /read/rawshanai-nama/about · sections #tawhid … #nafs · couplets #v-<verse> |
| Catalogue kind | ismaili (blurb widened to "tenth–eleventh century … al-Sijistānī and Nāṣir-i Khusraw"), titleLang: "fa" |
| Status | working edition · transcription AI-read from the page images, human proofreading pending · reviewed by: — |
1. Edition, digital source, copyright
- Base: the Kāviyānī edition, Berlin 1340/1921–22 (dar chāpkhāna-yi «Kāviyānī» dar Barlin), in the undated Tehran offset reprint (Kitābfurūshī-yi Maḥmūdī) bound with the Safarnāma and the Saʿādat-nāma. The Rawshanāʾī-nāma is separately paginated pp. 5–36.
- Digital source: the page images of archive.org
safarnmahinirkhu01niriuoft(University of Toronto, Robarts; 244 leaves, back to front). Printed page p = leaf n = 60 − p (p. 11 = n49, checked; p. 22 = n38): e.g. p. 11 <https://archive.org/details/safarnmahinirkhu01niriuoft/page/n49/mode/1up>, p. 22 <https://archive.org/details/safarnmahinirkhu01niriuoft/page/n38/mode/1up>. Each verse number in the reader links to its page. The local copy isdata/raw/persian/nasir-khusraw/safarnama-rawshanai-saadat_tehran-1922.pdf(same scan; PDF page = leaf + 1). The OCR is unusable (scope note §1.4). - What the Kāviyānī text is. It reprints Hermann Ethé's critical text "with notes and small changes" (editor's introduction): Ethé, "Nâṣir Chusrau's Rûšanâînâma oder Buch der Erleuchtung, in Text und Uebersetzung, nebst Noten …", part I in ZDMG 33 (1879), pp. 645–665 (vv. 1–162) and part II in ZDMG 34 (1880), pp. 428–464 (vv. 163ff.), from three MSS: G (Gotha), L (Leiden), I (India Office). So for this selection Ethé's Persian is in ZDMG 34, printed above his German on the same pages (not ZDMG 33, as the scope note assumed). The Kāviyānī footnotes give MS readings (G, L, I) and corrections marked (غ) / (غ ظ) by the editor.
- Numbering. The Kāviyānī prints no verse numbers; ours are Ethé's, checked against his marginal numerals (every fifth verse: 163, 170, 175, 180, 185, 190, 195, 200, 205, 210, 215, 220, 225, 230, 235, 240, 245, 250, 255, 260, 265, 270, 275, 280, 285, 290, 295, 300, 305, 310, 315, 320, 325, 330, 340, 345, 350, 355, all matching).
- Copyright. The base text: PD-US (published 1921–22; a photomechanical reprint adds nothing). Ethé's text and German (Ethé d. 1917): public domain. The editor M. Ghanī-zāda's introduction is NOT reproduced, nor his footnotes (our apparatus describes them in our words). The *Saʿādat-nāma* in the same volume (attribution doubtful) is not included.
2. Transcription
- Source file:
scripts/persian/kaviani-1340-rawshanai.tsv(verse, hemistich 1, hemistich 2, printed page, flag), with the edition's headings (#H), reader sections (#S, 13) and the gap (#G, vv. 328–338). - Method: each page image rendered at 250 dpi from the PDF and read in three bands by AI (Claude); every word follows the image; Ethé's Persian (ZDMG 34) was used to check the numbering and, at three places, to settle what the image shows (v. 179 ازیرا, v. 180 کنی, both confirmed on a zoomed image).
- Normalisation: word spacing; ی/ک; no vowel marks; the print's joined forms kept where they are one word in the line (اورا, بچشم, زآب, کزین); v. 206 وآن written as one word (the metre reads v-ān).
- Flagged doubtful (
?, shown to the reader with a note):- v. 200 ازان آمد فروغ عقل ماوای: the Kāviyānī editor says all three MSS must be corrupt; Ethé took L's reading. Taqavī: furūd-i ʿaql dar vāy.
- v. 220 که زادستند این هر چار افلاک: Ethé prints ازین "from these"; Taqavī … این هر چار ز افلاک "born of the spheres".
- v. 225 بهم بستند یکسر را خوشی جان: unclear; MS I ākhshījān "the elements"; Taqavī ʿahd u paymān "covenant and pact".
- v. 290 نبضت: Ethé's combination of damaged readings ("G: نبرت"); Taqavī tan rā "the body".
- Not flagged but noted: v. 203 یکی را (all three MSS ره, "once": Ethé and the Kāviyānī print را; Taqavī ره).
- To do: a human proofreading against the images; a full collation with Taqavī (§2a).
2a. Second witness: the Taqavī Dīvān (1925–28)
Dīvān-i Nāṣir-i Khusraw, ed. Naṣr Allāh Taqavī et al. (Tehran 1304–07/1925–28), archive.org DivaanNaserXosrowDivanEQasaaidOMuqattaaatEHakeemNasirKhusrauFarsi, local data/raw/persian/nasir-khusraw/divan_taqavi-tehran-1925-28.pdf (PDF page = printed page + 116; the Rawshanāʾī-nāma title at printed p. 511, v. 163 at p. 517). It re-collates the Berlin text (its sigla: B = Berlin) with a manuscript and often differs in order and in readings; it also has couplets Ethé left out (e.g. before v. 232, chi guftand ān ḥakīmān sukhan-gūy, which Ethé dropped as a repetition). Checked only at the doubtful places and the lines that do not scan (pp. 517–525), not collated in full. Readings recorded:
| v. | Kāviyānī (base) | Taqavī | Bearing |
|---|---|---|---|
| 171 | zabūn-ast | burūn-ast (L's reading) | |
| 176 | gul u shimshād bar khāk ū nigārad | gul u shimshād u sarv ū mī-nigārad | |
| 178 | ham ū z-āb-i manī kard-ast | hama z-āb-i manī karda-ast | |
| 185 | zi jaw jaw āyad | zi jaw jaw rūyad | |
| 180–184, 186 | in another order | ||
| 188 | zi avval | az avval | |
| 194 | ān du dīgar | ān du gawhar | |
| 200 | furūgh-i ʿaql māvāy | furūd-i ʿaql dar vāy | doubtful line |
| 203 | yakī rā | yakī rah | with the MSS |
| 213 | khvāham z-īn badar shud "go out from this" | khvāham zī pidar shud "go to the Father" (cf. John 14:28) | §5, serious |
| 214 | farzand-i ʿaql-i kull; ruhbān | farzand-i nafs-i kull; rahbar | §5 |
| 219 | maʿnī chu durr | maʿnī-yi chūn durr (iḍāfa marked) | metre: see §3a |
| 220 | īn har chār aflāk | īn har chār z-aflāk | doubtful line |
| 221 | sard u khushk u garm u tar bast / … tar hast | garm u khushk u sard u tar hast / chunān-chūn sardtar u khushktar hast | |
| 225 | yaksar rā khvushī jān | yaksar ʿahd u paymān | doubtful line |
| 235 | chūnk futād | *chūnki uftād* | metre: scans |
| 240 | yār bā ū māh | māh ū-rā māh | |
| 251 | tuʾī tu bigū ākhir kudām-ast | tuʾī-yi tu bigū tā khvud kudām-ast | metre: see §3a |
| 258 | zi jā u az jihat hastī | zi jā-yi u az jihat bāshī | |
| 288 | dilat rā armaghānī tamām-ast | dilat z-ū bā maʿānī tamām-ast | metre |
| 290 | nabḍat hast bahra / chu narmī yā durushtī | *tan rā hast bahra / chu az narmī biyābad* | doubtful word |
These are recorded, not taken into the text: the base stays the Kāviyānī as printed.
3. Layers
| Layer | Source | Status |
|---|---|---|
| Persian | Kāviyānī 1921–22 (after Ethé), our transcription | PD-US base; ours |
| English, per couplet | AI (Claude), scripts/persian/ai/rawshanai-nama-en.tsv, written from the Kāviyānī Persian; compared with Ethé afterwards (§5) | AI, marked |
| Word glosses | AI (Claude), scripts/persian/ai/rawshanai-nama-glosses.tsv: 957 written forms; function words reuse ʿAṭṭār's glosses, the poem's terms (ʿaql, nafs, jawhar, ʿaraḍ …) glossed afresh | AI, marked |
| Transliteration | AI (Claude), scripts/persian/ai/rawshanai-nama-tr.tsv, IJMES Persian (§3a) | AI, marked; 362/368 hemistichs scan |
| Ethé's German | ZDMG 34 (1880) pp. 428–457, scripts/persian/ethe-1880-de.tsv, transcribed from the archive.org page images of in.ernet.dli.2015.530651 (DLI scan of ZDMG 34; leaf n = page + 68, e.g. p. 428 = <https://archive.org/details/in.ernet.dli.2015.530651/page/n496/mode/1up>), checked against the item's OCR. Only pp. 428–459 were fetched (data/raw/persian/nasir-khusraw/ethe-zdmg34/). ZDMG 33 (part I) is in.ernet.dli.2015.530650 (not fetched: not needed for this selection). | public domain; shown per couplet (Aa → Ethé, off by default) |
Build: python3 scripts/persian/build_rawshanai.py → app/src/data/rawshanai-nama.json.
3a. Transliteration and metre
Scheme as for ʿAṭṭār (mantiq-tayr.md §3a; About page #transliteration). The metre is hazaj musaddas maḥdhūf (mafāʿīlun mafāʿīlun faʿūlun, u – – – | u – – – | u – –), checked by scripts/persian/scan_metre.py --text rawshanai-nama: the ʿAṭṭār scanner generalised to take the metre as a parameter (METRES: ramal, hazaj; TEXTS: each text's metre and files). Re-running ʿAṭṭār gives 549/564, unchanged, and mantiq-tayr.json rebuilds byte-identical. Negative controls fail as they should (a word dropped, an iḍāfa removed, ramal feet).
Readings the metre decided, for example: v. 172 ṣāniʿ-i haft u chahār; v. 189 ʿillat-i ūlāsh, ādam-i maʿnīsh; v. 195 khvāndash; v. 205/242 Zāvūsh with long ū; v. 206 v-ān, bihisht ābād Nāhīd without iḍāfa; v. 212 kurra-yi (the print's shadda); v. 236 Mushtarī-yash; v. 254 jān-i bu l-ʿajab; v. 275 z aʿlā … ba-asfal; v. 317 ẓulmānī-yash; v. 343 ḥayf-i tamām; Arabic plurals said Persian-fashion (ḥavās, ʿām-and, khāṣān). Two places take an unwritten iḍāfa that Taqavī marks (with a shadda on the yā): v. 219 maʿnī-yi chu durr, v. 251 tuʾī-yi tu.
Result: 184/184 couplets, 368 hemistichs; 362 scan, 6 do not. Marked † in the reader:
| Verse | Hemistich (as read) | Note |
|---|---|---|
| 190.1 | mar ū-rā ʿālam-i jabarūt nām-ast | jabarūt (u u –) does not fit; jabrūt would |
| 191.1, .2 | az-īrā khāma-yi yazdānash khvānand / rasūl-i nāma-yi yazdānash khvānand | both halves fail at the same place (-nash khvā-); Taqavī the same words (nāmand for khvānand in .2) |
| 196.1 | bidān gar jānat bā ʿaql āshnā shud | the second foot opens long (-nat); Taqavī the same |
| 235.1 | v-az-ān pas dar mashīma chūnk futād | Taqavī's chūnki uftād scans |
| 288.2 | dilat rā armaghānī tamām-ast | one syllable short; Taqavī dilat z-ū bā maʿānī-yi tamām-ast differs |
4. Notes on the text
- v. 218 and v. 231 name the poet by his rank in the Ismaili mission, Ḥujjat ("the Proof"), "sitting like a king in Yumgān", his place of exile in Badakhshān.
- vv. 172–187: against those who make God the direct maker of the four elements and seven planets (Ethé's note), or of plants and seed: God creates the Intellect only; "one came to be manifest from Him" (v. 184; the Neoplatonic ex uno non fit nisi unum).
- vv. 188–200: the Universal Intellect = the Throne, the First Cause, the Adam of meaning, the world of jabarūt, the pen; the Universal Soul = the Eve of meaning, the sum of the angels, the Tablet, the Footstool. Parallel (not a documented source) to al-Sijistānī's Maqālīd, Intellect and Soul keys (
/read/maqalid). - vv. 236–242: the embryo nurtured month by month by the seven planets (Saturn → … → moon → Saturn, Jupiter delivering in the ninth).
- v. 213: the Messiah's saying; the Taqavī reading zī pidar "to the Father" is attractive (John 14:28); Ethé translates the Kāviyānī's.
- Quran: v. 349 Abraham the idol-breaker, son of Āzar (Q 6:74); v. 352 Qārūn (Q 28:76–82); v. 183 astaghfiru llāh. Not run through
scripts/quran_refs.py(Arabic only; to adapt, as for ʿAṭṭār).
5. Triangulation (§17): our English and Ethé's German
Done by hand in this session (scripts/triangulate.py does not read Persian yet), written to app/src/content/triangulation/rawshanai-nama.json in the standard format; the reader shows "Translators differ" under 13 couplets. Ethé's German is a free rhymed version, but it keeps one couplet to two lines, so the comparison is couplet by couplet. They agree on the sense of the other 171 couplets. The divergences:
| v. | Cause | Ethé | Our English | Note |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 200 | variant | Soul lends glory to the Intellect's throne-seat | radiance of the Intellect's abode | corrupt line (Taqavī differs) |
| 209 | interpretation | all have an equal share in God's kingdom | look well into God's kingdom | yakī |
| 213 | variant | "I strive out of constraint" | "I will go out of this" | Taqavī: "to the Father" |
| 214 | variant | sprung from Soul and Intellect | child of the Universal Intellect | Taqavī: of the Universal Soul |
| 225 | variant | soul given to all to please by doing good | bound in the pleasure of soul (?) | Taqavī: covenant and pact |
| 235 | term | God lays the ground | the master of the sphere | the planets follow |
| 262 | interpretation | He loves to give the unchanging | nothing is lessened in Him | |
| 290 | variant | (omits the doubtful word) | your pulse (?) | Taqavī: the body |
| 304 | term | the gardener tends the tree | its gardener is the Lord | parvardigār |
| 318 | interpretation | the heart macrocosm, the body microcosm | man the lesser world, the cosmos the greater | |
| 320 | syntax | must care for others | is a nurturer (or: knower of himself and of the Lord) | |
| 351 | consonantal | princes (malik) serve the porter | an angel (malak) serves a doorkeeper | ملک |
| 352 | term | half-blindness suits Qārūn (aʿwar) | Qārūn stripped bare (ʿūr) |
AI-English check (aiCheck): no contradiction of a reading the two share. Doubtful, for review: v. 272 (az Īzad … bāz), v. 320 (above). v. 220 agrees once its bracket is read.
6. Open questions
- Human proofreading of the transcription; the four doubtful readings; a full collation with Taqavī (only ~25 lines checked).
- The six hemistichs that do not scan (several point to the text, not the reading: Taqavī scans at v. 235).
- Persian lemmatisation for the word panel; Quran references (§4).
7. Change log
- 2026-10-04: scanner generalised (
scan_metre.py; ʿAṭṭār 549/564 unchanged); vv. 163–327, 339–357 transcribed from the Kāviyānī images with Ethé's numbering; transliteration (362/368 scan), glosses (957 forms), AI English; Ethé's German per couplet (ZDMG 34 page images); Taqavī checked at the doubtful places; triangulation (13 divergences); reader/read/rawshanai-nama, catalogue kindismaili, Platonic-current node nasir_khusraw →read: rawshanai-nama.