Added to the Greek reader on 2 October 2026 (127e–135e) for the theme path "Seeing with the heart" (docs/research/heart-sight.md), by the pipeline of the Symposium pilot; extended the same day to the whole dialogue, with the ancient commentaries as readers through the ages (§7c). The id alcibiades-1-mirror is kept so that links (#s-133a, the heart-sight path) stay valid. Method: docs/EDITORIAL-METHOD.md.
| Work / author / dates | Alcibiades I (Ἀλκιβιάδης α), transmitted with Plato's works. Its authenticity has been doubted since Schleiermacher and is still debated (reported); it was the first dialogue of Iamblichus' course in the Neoplatonic schools: verified in Proclus, In Alc., Creuzer p. 11; Olympiodorus, In Alc., Creuzer pp. 10–11; the anonymous Prolegomena, ch. 26 (Hermann vol. 6, p. 219) (§7c) |
| Part added | The whole dialogue, 103a–135e (127e–135e first; 103a–127e added 2 Oct 2026) |
| Reader route | /read/alcibiades-1-mirror · about /read/alcibiades-1-mirror/about · sections #s-103a … #s-135e |
| Status | working edition · reviewed by: — |
1. Witnesses
| Siglum | Witness | Kind | Licence | Location |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Burnet | J. Burnet, Platonis Opera II (Oxford Classical Texts, 1901) | standard edition | public domain | as digitised by Perseus |
| P | Perseus Digital Library, canonical-greekLit tlg0059.tlg013.perseus-grc2 (EpiDoc; Stephanus milestones, speakers, <add> for 133c8–17) | digital | CC BY-SA 4.0 | github.com/PerseusDL/canonical-greekLit |
| G | GLAUx corpus, document 0059-013 (A. Keersmaekers) | digital, analysed | CC BY-SA 4.0 | github.com/alekkeersmaekers/glaux |
Consulted, not used: Denyer (Cambridge 2001) is in copyright (not held locally).
2. Base and why
Burnet via Perseus, as for the Symposium; GLAUx's tokens carry their Stephanus sections.
3. Collation
- Script:
scripts/plato/build_greek.py alcibiades-1-mirror. 162 sections; tokens walked back through P for its speaker turns (903 labelled turns, ΣΩ. or ΑΛ. as P labels them) and for P's<add>in 133c. Every token was found apart from 135 halves of compounds (‑δέ, ‑τε, crasis) and quotation marks. - GLAUx's artificial
SPEAKER=tokens and ellipticEtokens are dropped.
4. Decisions
- 133c8–17 (from ἆρʼ οὖν, ὅθʼ ὥσπερ κάτοπτρα to ναί: 71 tokens) are not in Plato's medieval manuscripts. Verified 2 October 2026 on the page images:
- Burnet, Platonis Opera II (1901), prints them between angle brackets ⟨ ⟩ (a supplement), and his apparatus at 133c reads: "c 8–17 Ἆρʼ οὖν … Ναί Eusebius : om. B T (sed talia fere legerunt Iulianus Stobaeus)". So his text of the lines is Eusebius's; his two manuscripts B and T omit them; Julian and Stobaeus are said only to have read "roughly such things". Scan: archive.org
platonisopera02platuoft, page n362 (the page headed 133a; the lines continue on n363 to 133c17 ⟨ΑΛ. Ναί.⟩). - Eusebius, Praeparatio evangelica XI.27.5 (Viger p. 551b–c) quotes 133c1–17 continuously, with the lines in exactly the place where Burnet prints them, as proof that Plato learned from Moses. Checked in Dindorf's text (Leipzig 1867, vol. 2, pp. 56–57; First1KGreek
tlg2018.tlg001.1st1K-grc1, GitHub) and in Gifford's translation (Oxford 1903, vol. III.2, pp. 595–596, the lines in round brackets, note at 551 b 8: "The passage in brackets is not in the MSS. of Plato"; archive.org). Mras's edition (GCS 43.2, 1956) was not consulted: its archive.org scans are lending-only. - Stobaeus, Anthologium III.21.24 (chapter "Περὶ τοῦ γνῶθι σαυτόν"; ed. O. Hense, Wachsmuth–Hense vol. III, Berlin 1894, pp. 573–577, lemma "Ἐν ταὐτῷ (p. 132 B — p. 134 B)"; the lines at p. 576.4–11; archive.org
adw8682.0003.001.umich.edu, page n655) excerpts 132b–134b and has a version of the lines at a different point: after "Τὸ δὲ γιγνώσκειν αὑτὸν ὡμολογοῦμεν σωφροσύνην εἶναι; — Πάνυ γε" (133c18–19), opening "Ἆρʼ ὥσπερ κάτοπτρα" (no οὖν, ὅθʼ), with "καθαρώτερά τε", and with 133c18–19 then repeated. Hense's apparatus (p. 576, on line 4) prints Eusebius's form for comparison and notes that Wex wanted Stobaeus's text put after οὐκ ἔχομεν (133c3) with τῷ θεῷ … φαίνεται deleted. - Julian: named by Burnet; the locus is not given there and was not checked.
- So: "transmitted via Eusebius and Stobaeus" was loose. Burnet's text is Eusebius's; Stobaeus is a second, differently placed and slightly different witness. The claim that most editors take the lines as a late-antique addition (in the reader note) is not verified and is dropped from the corrected wording below.
- Burnet's ⟨ ⟩ marks a supplement; ⟦ ⟧ conventionally marks words an editor deletes. Changed 2 Oct 2026: the reader now marks the lines ⟨ ⟩ as Burnet does, and its note says they are supplied from an indirect witness (Eusebius), not deleted.
- Taylor (1804) prints them in square brackets; his note names "Stobæus, Serm. 21. p. 183" and he places them where Stobaeus does, after "to know oneself we acknowledge to be wisdom" (133c18–19). So his source is Stobaeus (from his note and his placement; his English cannot show which Greek form he followed word by word). The words carry
insin the data. Neither Jowett nor Lamb translates them, so an AI English is given in the note, marked AI. The path "Seeing with the heart" (content/paths.json, stop 133a, "ground") now carries the verified wording.
- Burnet, Platonis Opera II (1901), prints them between angle brackets ⟨ ⟩ (a supplement), and his apparatus at 133c reads: "c 8–17 Ἆρʼ οὖν … Ναί Eusebius : om. B T (sed talia fere legerunt Iulianus Stobaeus)". So his text of the lines is Eusebius's; his two manuscripts B and T omit them; Julian and Stobaeus are said only to have read "roughly such things". Scan: archive.org
- Speakers are shown as P labels them (ΣΩ., ΑΛ.), at the start of each turn.
- Corrections to the automatic analysis (17, listed on the About page, each with its reason): 132c ἐπιμελητέον (ἐπιμέλω → ἐπιμελέομαι), 132d ἐννοῶμεν (ἐννοόω → ἐννοέω), 133e κατιδεῖν (κατοράω → καθοράω); for the whole dialogue: ἀτεχνῶς (116e, 123a; ἄτεχνος → ἀτεχνῶς), 120b τρίχα (→ θρίξ 'hair'), 123c ὑός (ὗς 'pig' → υἱός); and from the triangulation (§7b): 129d ἀρτίως (ἄρτιος → ἀρτίως), 128d ἄλλῃ ×2 (adverb → dative of ἄλλος with τέχνῃ), 104b γένεσιν (γένεσις → γένος), 106c παριέναι (παρέρχομαι → πάρειμι 'come forward'), 106c ὅτι (→ ὅ τι, ὅστις), 113b ἦ (ἠμί → εἰμί 'I was'), 119c περιέσομαι (περιέρχομαι → περίειμι 'prevail'), 123c ἐξῃρημένους (ἐκλέγω → ἐξαιρέω), 126e ἐπισταμένῃ (ἐφίστημι → ἐπίσταμαι).
- Two lemmas the first triangulation called errors were checked and kept: 131d ἄπεισιν (lemma ἄπειμι is right for both homographs; the shared gloss now gives both, 'be away' from εἰμί and 'go away' from εἶμι), and 133c ὅθʼ (= ὅτʼ, ὅτε elided and aspirated before ὥσπερ; ὅθεν cannot elide; the gloss of ὅτε now adds its causal sense 'since').
5. Segmentation and word IDs
162 passages, one per Stephanus section (#s-103a … #s-135e); word IDs <section>.<n> (unchanged for 127e–135e when the text was extended).
6. Analysis layer
- LSJ: 1,020 of 1,072 lemmas matched (the misses are mostly proper names, and a few particles LSJ files elsewhere).
- Etymology: Boisacq 505, LSJ's derivations ~280, Wiktionary 908.
- Glosses: AI, shared by lemma with the other Greek texts; 338 written for 103a–127e on 2 October 2026 (
scripts/plato/ai/greek4-glosses-5.tsv, from LSJ's first senses and one occurrence each, by headless Claude), and the doubtful ones corrected after triangulation (§7b).
7. Translation
- Jowett, 3rd ed. (1892), vol. 2, Appendix I, pp. 457 ff. (in an appendix, apart from the dialogues Jowett took to be Plato's). Text: Project Gutenberg #1676, compared word by word with the OCR of the 1892 volume (archive.org
dialoguesofplat02plat): the wording agrees; Gutenberg's two inline cross-references "(Compare Arist. Pol.)" (footnotes in 1892) are removed and "Erechteus" restored to the printed "Erechtheus". Divided into sections automatically against Lamb's sectioned English (a clause either way). - Lamb, Loeb vol. 8 (1927), via Perseus
tlg013.perseus-eng2, sectioned by Perseus. Public domain in the US (95-year term ended 2022); Lamb died 1946, so public domain in life+70 countries too.
- Sydenham–Taylor: Floyer Sydenham's translation (1767–80) as revised and annotated by Thomas Taylor, The Works of Plato (London 1804), vol. 1, pp. 16–96 (the whole dialogue; pp. 78–96 first), with Taylor's (T.) and Sydenham's (S.) notes kept apart (91 notes; 15 on 127e–135e; Taylor's on 133b–c quote Proclus, Platonic Theology I.3). Taylor alone of our translators prints 133c8–17, in square brackets, from Stobaeus (§4). Text: transcribed by AI (Claude) from two archive.org OCRs of the 1804 printing (
in.ernet.dli.2015.39263,thwworksofplatov0001thom), page by page (for pp. 16–77 the pages are cut by the archive.org page map ofthwworksofplatov0001thom), long s modernised, 1804 spelling kept; 180 places the transcription could not settle are listed in the file (uncertain), mostly punctuation; not yet checked word by word against the page images. The sectioning of a few 127e–135e clauses moved by a clause when the whole text was aligned (129a–b, 130e–131a, 133b–c). Sectioned like Jowett (scripts/plato/tr_sydenham_alcibiades.py). Public domain (1804; Sydenham d. 1787, Taylor d. 1835).
7b. Translation triangulation (scripts/triangulate.py alcibiades-1-mirror, PROTOCOLS §17), 2 October 2026
First run (127e–135e, morning). Jowett, Lamb, Sydenham–Taylor; Olympiodorus from the uncorrected OCR. 66 divergences, 22 serious. Our AI English of 133c8–17: no contradiction (checked against Taylor). 15 glosses flagged "doubtful"; fixed (shared by lemma, so every Greek text gets them; build_lexicon.py rerun for all six): φέρω (127e, 128d) + "(imperative φέρε) come now"; πολλάκις (127e) + "(after εἰ or μή) perhaps, by chance"; ᾗ (128c) + "in which way (dative of ὅς)" (the word itself was already analysed as ὅς); ἄλλῃ (128d) lemma corrected to ἄλλος (§4); ἀρτίως (129d) lemma corrected (§4), gloss "just now, lately"; ἔχω (129e, 133c) + "(with infinitive) be able"; ἕως (131d) + "while, as long as"; ἄπειμι (131d) "be away, be absent; (from εἶμι) go away" (lemma kept, §4); ἀπολείπω (132a) + "leave behind, abandon"; ὅτε (133c) + "since, seeing that" (lemma kept, §4); ἀρχή (134c, 135a) + "rule, office"; σχῆμα (135d) + "bearing, role".
Second run (the whole dialogue, afternoon; --redo). Compared: Jowett (1892), Lamb (1927), Sydenham–Taylor (1804) on all 162 sections; commentaries, weighted by lineage (the braid entries carry it): Olympiodorus (whole, corrected), Proclus (to 116b, excerpts), Ficino's argumentum, the curriculum entries, Taylor's and Sydenham's notes. No copyrighted translation is held (no O'Neill, Hutchinson, Denyer), so none was compared privately.
- 257 divergences; 63 serious (shown as "Translators differ") in 54 sections: 35 interpretation, 12 term of art, 11 syntax, 5 variant. Commentators bear on 43 of the serious ones: Olympiodorus 39, Proclus 10, Sydenham's notes 4, Taylor's 1.
- The 133c8–17 divergence's wording was corrected by hand in the log and republished (
--revalidate): Burnet prints the lines from Eusebius; Stobaeus has a version placed later, where Taylor puts them. - AI-English check: 34 glosses flagged (30 doubtful, 4 contradiction), then 4 more on a rerun of those sections; all fixed, and a third run of the affected sections returned no flags. Lemma errors corrected in the data (§4): 104b γένεσιν, 106c παριέναι, 106c ὅτι, 113b ἦ, 119c περιέσομαι, 123c ἐξῃρημένους, 126e ἐπισταμένῃ. Glosses widened in our own words: ἀπαλλάσσω (middle 'depart'), φρονέω (μέγα φρονεῖν 'be proud'), θαυμαστός ('surprising'), ἐπιτίθημι (middle 'set about'), ἐφίημι ('allow'), ἐκεῖ ('there, in that case' first; the Neoplatonic 'intelligible world' second), σκευάριον ('gear, costume'), χαίρω (χαίρειν ἐᾶν 'let be'), ἔσχατος ('utmost'), διαφερόντως ('differently' first), τελέω ('pay'), ἑκάστοτε ('on each occasion'), ὄγκος ('dignity, pride'), δύναμις (εἰς δύναμιν), ἀκόλουθος ('consequent on'), οὗ ('where'), πλέθρον (as a measure of land), παρά (with accusative 'to'), κάμνω ('be ill'), συμβάλλω ('make contracts'), μή (μὴ οὐ), καλός (adverb 'well, rightly'), ὁστισοῦν ('anything'), ἀνδρεῖος ('of men'), πάρειμι ('come forward'), περίειμι (new), ὀρτυγοκόπος (a player), μήν (καὶ μήν 'and moreover'), ἐξαιρέω (new).
7c. Readers through the ages (scripts/plato/commentary_alc.py; app/src/content/plato/alcibiades-1-mirror-braid.json)
442 entries, every one with its edition, licence and a link to the page scan; each states the reader's lineage. Long texts are fetched when a section's readers are opened (app/public/data/plato/commentary/alcibiades-1-mirror-{olympiodorus,proclus}.json).
Olympiodorus, *In Alcibiadem*: F. Creuzer, Initia philosophiae ac theologiae ex Platonicis fontibus ducta II (Frankfurt: Brönner, 1821), public domain; archive.org creuzer-initia-philosophiae-ac-theologiae-ex-platonicis-fontibus-ducta-gr-lat-t.-2-1821, leaves n16–n247 = pp. 1–232 (page images https://archive.org/download/<item>/page/n<leaf>.jpg; each entry links its first page).
- OCR corrected for the whole commentary (lectures 1–28, not only 22–28) by
scripts/plato/ocr_creuzer.py: for each page, Tesseract (grc) and archive.org's OCR as witnesses, and Claude (headless) reading the page image in two strips at full width; Olympiodorus' Greek only (Creuzer's Latin notes left out), lemmata marked, ϑ written θ, nothing else normalised. Cached per page indata/raw/plato/olympiodorus/ai-pages/(gitignored); full corrected textolympiodorus-corrected.txt. 1,193 readings the model could not settle are listed (each comment shows those in its own text, "Uncertain readings in the print"); 24 pages were flagged for low agreement with Tesseract, which on inspection is mostly Creuzer's Greek-heavy footnotes in the OCR, not misreadings. Spot checks by eye against the images (pp. 10, 11, 84, 192, 198): no wrong words found beyond the listed uncertainties (p. 192 has ταύτην where the print may read ταὐτὴν). Not yet proofread page by page. - Structure: 28 lectures (Πρᾶξις σὺν θεῷ …; p. 170 prints θ̅ for the 19th, read as 19). 370 entries: the prologue (lectures 1–2 opening, pp. 1–9), each lecture's θεωρία (opening with the passage discussed; spans the sections of the lecture, "approximate"), and 352 comments on lemmata, each placed at the Stephanus section its lemma quotes ("exact": the lemma matched against Burnet's words; the lemmata are the largest run of quotations that never goes backwards, so Plato quoted from elsewhere stays in the text). A lemma Creuzer prints in two spaced pieces is one comment.
- English: AI (Claude), per lecture, marked; cached in
data/raw/plato/olympiodorus/ai-en/.
Proclus, *In Alcibiadem* (to 116b): Creuzer, Initia I (Frankfurt 1820), public domain; archive.org creuzer-initia-philosophiae-ac-theologiae-ex-platonicis-fontibus-ducta-gr-lat-t.-1-1820. Westerink (1954) and Segonds (1985–86) are in copyright and were not used; O'Neill's English (1965) is not held.
- Proclus spends some 340 pages on 103a–116b, so the layer gives an excerpt per lemma: the lemma and the opening of his comment (about 1,800 characters), with the page on which the next excerpted lemma starts. The lemma pages were found by matching Burnet's Greek against archive.org's hOCR of every page; 134 pages were corrected as for Olympiodorus (578 uncertain readings listed; 234 fall in the excerpts). 65 excerpts, 103a–116a; plus the prologue's opening (p. 1) and its passage on Iamblichus' course (p. 11), both checked by eye.
- English: AI, marked.
The course (lineage). Proclus p. 11 (Iamblichus gave it "the first place among the ten dialogues"), Olympiodorus pp. 10–11 (to be placed first of all; the dialogue is the propylaea of the temple, the Parmenides its sanctuary), and the anonymous Prolegomena, ch. 26 (Hermann's XXVI), in Platonis dialogi ed. K. F. Hermann vol. 6 (Teubner 1887 reprint of 1853), p. 219, archive.org platonisdialogi06plat n262: Iamblichus' twelve dialogues, "first the Alcibiades, because in it we come to know ourselves", last the Philebus (the print names eleven; the Sophist and Statesman supplied by modern editors are reported, not checked). All three read from the page images.
Ficino: Argumentum Marsilii in Alcibiadem primum de natura hominis, in Plato, Opera, Latin by Ficino (Florence: Laurentius de Alopa, 1484[–85]), unpaginated: Kraków copy, archive.org jbc.bj.uj.edu.pl.NDIGSTDR006716, images n22–n23 (the leaf foliated "16" by hand), checked against the Florence copy of the same printing (ita-bnc-in2-00000298-001, n55). Collated with Lyon 1590 (p. 755) and Paris 1641 (Opera II, pp. 106–107): differences are of spelling, plus 1590/1641 "animam ut ideam / ut idem" for 1484 "animam in idea", 1590 "A quo" for "A qua", 1641 "omnino" for "nomino". The Basel Opera (1561/1576) vol. 2 was not found on archive.org (both local OCRs are vol. 1). Contractions expanded; paragraph breaks ours; 6 uncertain readings listed. English AI. Shown at 129e (its definition of man).
The Arabic transmission (graded note). Checked in OpenITI texts and the scholarship, 2 Oct 2026:
- Documented: the title only. Ibn al-Nadīm, Fihrist (Theon's list of Plato's works): «قولان سماهما القيبادس في الجميل» "two discourses he called Alcibiades, on the beautiful" (OpenITI
0385IbnNadim.Fihrist.Shamela0007642-ara3, l. 7274, printed vol. 1 p. 304; no translator named, unlike the Republic, Laws, Timaeus and Sophist nearby); Ibn al-Qifṭī copies it garbled (الفيناذس); Ibn Abī Uṣaybiʿa, ʿUyūn, «القيبيادس الأول … القيبيادس الثاني» (OpenITI0668IbnAbiUsaybica.CuyunAnba.Shamela0006687-ara1, l. 2421). Both lines checked. - No evidence found of an Arabic translation, epitome or gnomological excerpt of the dialogue's content (the self as the soul that uses the body; the eye in the eye), nor of an Arabic Proclus or Olympiodorus on it (the Fihrist's Proclus list has none), in Ibn Abī Uṣaybiʿa's, al-Shahrazūrī's and Miskawayh's sayings collections (keyword searches). Not checked directly: al-Mubashshir, the Ṣiwān al-ḥikma, Ḥunayn's Ādāb (not in OpenITI); Gutas in DPhA Va (paywalled).
- Possible echo only: al-Masʿūdī's "saying of Plato" on the Ḥarrān temple, "whoever knows his essence becomes divine" (Murūj, OpenITI
0346Mascudi.MurujDhahab.JK010344-ara1ll. 12454–56); Rosenthal (Islamic Culture 14, 1940, p. 409 n. 3) compares Alc. I 130a–131a, without claiming transmission. Altmann ("The Delphic Maxim", 1963, pp. 198–200, 224) traces the Arabic "know yourself" to a late Greek source and Proclus' commentary, not to an Arabic Alcibiades. The bare maxim (man ʿarafa nafsahu) is not evidence for the dialogue. - In the layer: two entries at 103a (Ibn al-Nadīm, Ibn Abī Uṣaybiʿa), title only, with AI English.
8. Rights
Share-alike as for the other Perseus texts. Nothing in copyright is shown.
9. Open questions / to review
- ~~Check Burnet's presentation of 133c8–17 and the Eusebius and Stobaeus references~~: done 2 Oct 2026 (§4). Taylor's source: Stobaeus, from his note and placement (§4). Still open: Julian's locus; Mras's apparatus to PE XI.27.5.
- Collate with Denyer (2001).
- ~~A readers layer~~: done (§7c). Open: proofread the corrected Creuzer Greek page by page, starting with the listed uncertain readings; correct the rest of Proclus (only the lemma pages are done); Taylor's "Additional notes … from the MS. commentary of Proclus" (1804, vol. 1, pp. 481 ff.) could give a public-domain English beside some Proclus excerpts.
- Check the Sydenham–Taylor transcription against the 1804 page images (pp. 16–96), starting with its 180
uncertainplaces; 6 pages (23, 38, 50, 58, 68, 69) were not located in the alignment, so their notes' sections are approximate; p. 79 prints "Soc." where the sense needs Alcibiades ('I do not apprehend your meaning').
9b. Pending for the data: applied (2 Oct 2026)
The corrected 133c8–17 wording is in the reader note (build_greek.py → insertion.note), the docstring, the triangulation file (via the log, §7b) and the Sydenham note (Taylor's source shown from his note and placement); the reader marks the lines ⟨ ⟩.
10. Change log
- 2026-10-02: the whole dialogue (103a–135e), id kept; Sydenham–Taylor pp. 16–96; Olympiodorus (whole) and Proclus (excerpts to 116b) corrected from Creuzer's page images as readers through the ages, with the curriculum entries, Ficino's argumentum (1484) and the Arabic bibliographers (§7c); 133c8–17 marked ⟨ ⟩ with the corrected note (§9b); triangulation rerun and all glosses it flagged fixed (§7b); 12 lemma corrections.
- 2026-10-02: 133c8–17 claim verified on the page images (Burnet's apparatus; Eusebius PE XI.27.5; Stobaeus III.21.24, Hense p. 576) and corrected in §4, in
paths.jsonand indocs/research/heart-sight.md; wording for the data under §9b. - 2026-10-02: Sydenham–Taylor (1804) added as a translation layer; translation triangulation run (§7b).
- 2026-10-02: added: Greek with speakers, 133c8–17 marked, lemmas (three corrected), LSJ, Boisacq, Wiktionary, AI glosses, Jowett and Lamb, AI English of 133c8–17; the "Seeing with the heart" stop now opens at 133a.