| Work / author / dates | Qiṣṣat al-ghurba al-gharbiyya (قصة الغربة الغربية, "The Tale of the Occidental Exile") · Shihāb al-Dīn Yaḥyā b. Ḥabash al-Suhrawardī, al-Maqtūl (549–587 AH / 1154–1191 CE) |
| Part added | Whole text (short: a prologue + c. 45 numbered sections in Corbin's division; about 1,300 words) |
| Reader route | /read/ghurba · apparatus /read/ghurba/notes (proposed) |
| Status | witness survey done (step 2, 28 Sept 2026) · no text established yet · reviewed by: — |
Structure: doxology and prologue (the author read Avicenna's Ḥayy ibn Yaqẓān, found it lacking the hints to "the greatest stage" that are hidden in Salāmān wa-Absāl, and so wrote this tale), then the recital: the journey with the brother ʿĀṣim from Transoxiana to the West, capture in Qayrawān, the well and the palace, the hoopoe and the father's letter, the ship, the Quranic stations (Hūd, al-Kahf, al-Naml…), the ascent to the Fountain of Life and Mount Sinai, the meeting with the father, the necessary return to the western prison, the promise of final release, closing prayer. Dense with Quran quotation (at least 30 verses, mostly Hūd 11, al-Kahf 18, al-Naml 27): step 6 will matter. Relation to (B): it is written as an answer to Avicenna's Ḥayy ibn Yaqẓān (see ibn-sina-hayy.md); the two are to be read as a pair.
1. Witnesses
Independence: C (Corbin) is the only critical edition. R is a modern reprint that follows C's text and numbering without its apparatus, so R is DERIVED from C and carries no independent weight (useful only as an openly readable text layer of C). A (Amīn) is an independent early print from a single manuscript. P is the anonymous Persian translation-commentary, an early transmission witness. Order of weight for this text: C → P (as witness to readings) → A → R → digital texts.
| Siglum | Witness | Kind | Vowelled? | Licence | Location / text layer |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| C | Henry Corbin (ed.), Opera metaphysica et mystica II = Œuvres philosophiques et mystiques II (Kitāb Ḥikmat al-ishrāq, wa-yalīhi Risāla fī iʿtiqād al-ḥukamāʾ wa-Qiṣṣat al-ghurba al-gharbiyya), Tehran: Institut Franco-Iranien / Paris: Adrien-Maisonneuve, 1952 (Bibliothèque Iranienne 2); Ghurba c. pp. 273–297 (Corbin cites §44 at p. 296). Critical edition with apparatus; Corbin's "Prolégomènes II" (French) discuss the text and translate the prologue (p. 88). Reprinted in Corbin (ed.), Majmūʿa-yi muṣannafāt-i Shaykh-i Ishrāq II, Tehran: Pizhūhishgāh, 1993 (and later reprints). MSS: to be read from C's introduction (not on disk). Corbin notes that MS ʿĀshir 441 (Istanbul), catalogued as Avicenna's Ḥayy, is in fact the Ghurba (Corbin/Trask, Avicenna and the Visionary Recital, p. 127 n. 7). | critical ed. | partly (Quran and key words) | © (Corbin estate / IFRI); private layer | NOT ON DISK. Need a scan. |
| R | Mawsūʿat muṣannafāt al-Suhrawardī, Beirut: Dār Rawāfid li-l-ṭibāʿa wa-l-nashr, 1st ed. 1439/2018, ISBN 978-614-426-871-1 (printing: Dār al-Maḥajja al-Bayḍāʾ). Title page reads "ḥaqqaqahu wa-iʿtanā bihi" but the name is not in the OCR (possibly blank on the page: check the PDF title page). A compilation reprint: its contents reproduce Corbin OPM I–II (Talwīḥāt, Muqāwamāt, Mashāriʿ; Ḥikmat al-ishrāq with the very same half-title "wa-yalīhi Risāla fī iʿtiqād al-ḥukamāʾ wa-Qiṣṣat al-ghurba al-gharbiyya"), plus Abū Rayyān's Hayākil al-nūr study, Badawī's Arabic version of the Corbin–Kraus Aṣwāt ajniḥat Jibrāʾīl, etc. Ghurba: OCR offset ≈ 801,300–807,900, printed pp. 577–582; sections numbered (1)–(45) as in Corbin (§44 is the fall back into the West, matching Corbin's §44); Quran verses in ornamental brackets with sūra/āya footnotes added by the modern editor; no variant apparatus. | modern reprint of C (derived) | partly (lightly, following C) | © publisher 2018 (the text is Corbin's edition; not openly licensed) | Local: a private copy; archive.org 20200216_20200216_0716 (no licence stated) |
| A | Aḥmad Amīn (ed.), Ḥayy ibn Yaqẓān li-Ibn Sīnā wa-Ibn Ṭufayl wa-l-Suhrawardī, Cairo: Dār al-Maʿārif, 1952 (Dhakhāʾir al-ʿArab 8; later reprints). First print of the Ghurba, from one manuscript, the Escorial (Madrid) copy catalogued in error as Ibn Sīnā's, lent to Amīn by "al-ustādh al-Khuḍayrī" (Amīn's preface); Corbin: "a single manuscript and with a garbled title" (al-Gharība; Amīn's study writes «قصة الغريبة الغربية»). Independent of C. | early ed. (single MS) | lightly | Amīn d. 1954: PD in Egypt; US status uncertain | archive.org quran99yaai_gmail_201710 (a free-with-newspaper reprint, Dār al-Madā for al-Ittiḥād). Good Arabic text layer (first 200 KB checked; the Ghurba text itself lies further in: TODO). Amīn's study quotes it: سافرت مع أخي عاصم من ديار ما وراء النهر الى ساحل اللجة الخضراء الى مدينة القيروان في المغرب . فلما أحس قومها بقدومنا عليهم (note «ساحل اللجة الخضراء» against R's garbled line: a reading to compare with C). |
| P | Anonymous Persian translation and commentary (Qiṣṣa-yi ghurbat-i gharbī, 13th c.?), each section translating the Arabic, then explaining it. Ed. Corbin (in OPM II, or its Persian section; confirm) and reprinted with English by Thackston 1999 pp. 112–122 with marginal glosses from MS Istanbul Rāghıb Paşa 1480 (siglum "Ra"). Useful as a lemma witness: it renders each Arabic section. | commentary (Persian) | n/a | © (editions) | Thackston PDF/TXT on disk (Persian layer garbled OCR) |
| T | W. M. Thackston (ed. & tr.), The Philosophical Allegories and Mystical Treatises, Costa Mesa: Mazda, 1999 (Bibliotheca Iranica, Intellectual Traditions 2). Arabic text pp. 106–111 reprinted from Corbin (Treatise IX: "the Persian texts … edited by … Henry Corbin (Treatise IX)"); English facing the Persian pp. 112–122. Earlier translation: Thackston, The Mystical and Visionary Treatises of Suhrawardi, London: Octagon, 1982. | translation (+ reprint of C) | partly | © 1999 W. M. Thackston; cite only | a private copy. The Arabic text layer is unusable: ^tr^1 Jujf … 0^5" JCo y ijj-5 J C-^l |
| — | Other translations (cite only): Corbin, L'Archange empourpré, Paris: Fayard, 1976 (French, with the Persian commentary); Corbin's French of the prologue in "Prolégomènes II"; Heath? (not traced for the Ghurba: Heath 1992 translates Avicenna's Miʿrāj-nāma, not this). | translation | — | © | not on disk except via Corbin (Trask) citations |
| D | Digital texts: see the table below. None is openly licensed and independently sourced. | digital |
Digital texts checked
| Source | Result |
|---|---|
| OpenITI RELEASE | no Ghurba text (as stated in the brief). |
| Shamela / al-Waraq / Wikisource | not found in a web search (28 Sept 2026); not checked site by site. TODO. |
| archive.org | R (above); A (Amīn) = quran99yaai_gmail_201710. |
| Zaydān | Yūsuf Zaydān, Ḥayy ibn Yaqẓān: al-nuṣūṣ al-arbaʿa wa-mubdiʿūhā (Cairo: Dār al-Shurūq) prints the Ghurba with the texts of Ibn Sīnā, Ibn Ṭufayl and Ibn al-Nafīs: ©, modern reading text; base unknown (probably C or A). Noor-book PDF only. |
| Hindawi | Ibn Ṭufayl and Kaylānī only; no Suhrawardī. |
Quality of the local text layer (R)
Readable in straight narrative; badly broken wherever the print has Quran in ornamental brackets or vowelled words. Examples:
- good: «لمّا سافرتُ مع أخي عاصم من ديار ما وراء النهر إلى بلاد المغرب …» comes out as
مبدأ القصة: لمّا سافرتُ مع أخي عاصم من ديار ما وراء النهر إلى بلاد المفرته الس طاف من طور شال اللجة الهراة(the second half is OCR garbage for a Quranic phrase). - broken:
(۷) وكان في قعر البئر «إطلمت عصان بعَضٍ 4 «إذا أخرجنا أيدينا لم تكد نراها»(Q 24:40 garbled).
Estimate: ~70–80% of words usable; every Quran quotation (a third of the text) must be restored from Tanzil, and the non-Quranic damage (e.g. §§16–18, 22–23, 31, 36, 41, 44–45) re-read from page images.
2. Base and why
Recommendation (provisional): establish our consonantal text on C (Corbin 1952) read from page images, using R's OCR as the typing layer (it is Corbin's text and numbering) and Tanzil for all Quran quotations. Corbin's section numbers (1)–(45) become our segmentation. Rights: no openly licensed witness exists. The work is public domain; Corbin's edited text (1952) is not formally public domain, but a plain consonantal text of a 12th-century work with no editorial creativity beyond choice of readings is usually treated as reproducible; the apparatus, his vowelling choices and R's added notes are not. Publish our own working edition (consonantal text from C checked against A and P), with C's and A's readings cited, not reproduced as editions. Alternative if an openly licensed base is required: A (Amīn 1952; scan on archive.org; PD in Egypt), but it rests on one (Escorial) manuscript and Corbin judged it poor; use it as an independent check, not the base.
3. Collation
TODO (step 4). Planned: R OCR ↔ C (page images) ↔ A ↔ P lemmata (the Persian commentary quotes/renders each section).
4. Decisions (substantive)
TODO
5. Quotations verified
TODO. At least 30 Quran quotations; R's footnotes already give sūra:āya (e.g. Hūd 11:40–44, 81–83; al-Kahf 18:61, 71, 79, 94, 98; al-Naml 27:22, 28, 93; al-Nāziʿāt 79:40…). Replace verbatim from Tanzil.
6. Vowelling
TODO. C is only partly vowelled; AI vowelling will be needed, checked against C.
7. Segmentation and word IDs
Proposed: Corbin's §§ (prologue + 1–45). Word IDs gh:<§>:<token>. TODO.
8. Analysis layer
TODO
9. Commentaries aligned
TODO. Candidates: the anonymous Persian commentary (P; Thackston 1999, Corbin 1952/1976); Arabic commentary: none known to us; check Brockelmann GAL I 438 / S I 783 and Corbin's Prolégomènes II.
10. Translation
TODO. AI from the Arabic with an Ishrāqī glossary; Thackston and Corbin compared privately, never reproduced.
11. Rights and private layers
C, T, Corbin's French, and R's notes: private layer only. R's OCR is a working copy (like W in the Fuṣūṣ record), not an authority.
12. Open questions / to review
- Acquire C (OPM II, 1952, or the 1993 Pizhūhishgāh reprint, Ghurba pp. ~273–297 + Prolégomènes II): needed for the text, its apparatus and the list of MSS. Check archive.org / Internet Archive lending, USD library (ILL), or a scan.
- A (Amīn 1952) is on archive.org: extract its Ghurba pages as the second witness (independent Escorial MS).
- Check R's title page for the editor's name (the OCR has only "ḥaqqaqahu wa-iʿtanā bihi").
- Confirm where the Persian commentary was first edited (OPM II vs L'Archange empourpré) and the MSS it uses.
- Digital checks: Shamela, al-Waraq, Wikisource still to be searched directly (Hindawi checked: none).
13. Change log
- 2026-09-28: record created; witness survey (step 2).
Addendum, 28 Sept 2026: text established from A (steps 3–6, 8)
- Base used: A (Amīn 1952), the only openly usable witness. Located at printed pp. 131–134 (= PDF pp. 131–134 of the scan), headed «حي بن يقظان للسهروردي»; the text calls itself «قصة الغريبة الغربية». Transcribed from 220 dpi page images (the OCR used only as a typing aid); Amīn's three editorial footnotes are excluded. Printed vowels are almost nil (tanwīn, a few shaddas) and are kept as printed.
- Output:
data/sources/ghurba.json: 46 passages (prologue = 0, then Corbin's §§ 1–45, aligned on the reprint's numbering; A itself has no paragraphing), 1,059 words of A (1,063 tokens after Quran replacement). - Quotations: 27 exact Quran quotations replaced with the verbatim Tanzil (Uthmani) text and referenced (3 of them orthographic only: الوادي/ٱلْوَادِ 28:30, باسم/بِسْمِ 11:41, نبغي/نَبْغِ 18:64); 11 adapted allusions recorded but left as printed; 1 hadith (the prayer on waking, §13). A has none of Corbin's closing verses (27:93, 31:25) and none of §§29/31's Quranic phrases (25:45–46, 12:107).
- Changes to A: 31 (4 misprints corrected: وجنتكما→وجئتكما §10, ظنري→ظئري §19, ظلع→طلع §34, شنت→شئت §41; 27 Quran replacements). No reading of A was replaced by Corbin's.
- Collation with Corbin (private): A compared word by word, on the consonantal skeleton, with Corbin's text as reprinted in R (read from R's page images). 177 difference units: 10 orthographic, 167 substantive (131 replacements, 25 places where Corbin has words A lacks, amounting to 65 words, and 11 where A has words Corbin lacks, 12 words). A is shorter (1,059 vs 1,148 words): it lacks e.g. most of §29 and the Salāmān-and-Absāl clause of the prologue. The readings are in the private layer only (the private layer).
- Doubtful readings of A (print clear, sense doubtful; listed in
ghurba.json→uncertain): §§5, 8, 13, 15, 32, 36 (three words), 37, 39, 42, 43. - Not done: adjudication against C proper (the scan is still not on disk), the Persian commentary, AI vowelling (step 7), analysis, translation. Review by a person: pending.
- 2026-09-28: text of A established (46 passages), Quran verified, collated privately with Corbin (via R).