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About this text: The Ode on the Soul

القصيدة العينية

Ibn Sīnā (370–428/980–1037)

Twenty verses on the soul's descent like a dove from the highest place, and its longing to return.

On the Platonic Current: Avicenna

20 verses · ~5 min · audio

192 words

  • Audio: Arabic and English
  • Published translation: none (the English is AI, marked as such)

Not yet: commentaries.

much rare vocabulary

Lexical difficulty, from the words themselves: how many roots fall outside the 1,000 most frequent in the Quran, how long the words are, and how much of the vowelling had to be supplied by AI. It says how unfamiliar the vocabulary is, not how deep the ideas are.

Rare roots 21% · mean word length 4.3 letters · AI vowelling on 100% of words

Themes & resonances

What the text is about, and what it connects to across the history of thought. Every connection says what kind of claim it is: a documented lineage, a shared source, a resonance with no influence claimed, or a contrast. Mapped by AI; references are shown only once checked. Across the library

  • The dove's descent from the loftiest station into the bodyهبوطhubūṭroot هبط
  • Weeping over the effaced encampmentsطللṭalalroot طلل
  • Tears and cooing for the sanctuaryبكاءbukāʾroot بكي
  • The heavy body as snare and cageالثقيلal-thaqīlroot ثقل
  • The forgotten covenants of the sanctuaryعهودʿuhūdroot عهد
  • The lifting of the veil at departureحجابḥijābroot حجب
  • Descent for the sake of knowledgeالعلمal-ʿilmroot علم
  • The flight back and the lightning that folds awayرقيruqiyyroot رقي
  • The letters hāʾ, mīm and thāʾمركزmarkazroot ركز
What each theme is here
  • The dove's descent from the loftiest station into the body. The soul comes down like an ash-grey dove against her will, and the poem asks outright why she was cast down to the lowest abyss (verses 1, 3, 15).
  • Weeping over the effaced encampments. The old desert-ode opening, where the poet weeps over ruined campsites, becomes the soul weeping in the body for the dwellings it has lost (verses 4, 7, 9).
  • Tears and cooing for the sanctuary. The dove weeps whenever she remembers the sanctuary, and her cooing (sajʿ) is the sound of that longing (verses 8, 9, 12).
  • The heavy body as snare and cage. The body is 'the heavy', a dense net and a cage that bar the soul from the open heights, and at death it is left behind with the dust (verses 7, 10, 13).
  • The forgotten covenants of the sanctuary. Once settled in the body, the soul seems to have forgotten (nasiyat) the pledges and dwellings of her first home (verse 5).
  • The lifting of the veil at departure. The soul is veiled from every eye yet unveiled, and at the hour of return the veil is lifted so she sees what sleeping eyes cannot (verses 2, 12).
  • Descent for the sake of knowledge. Knowledge raises up whoever was not raised, and the descent may have been needed so the soul could hear what she had not heard, though she returns with her rent unmended (verses 14, 17, 18).
  • The flight back and the lightning that folds away. The soul climbs to sing on a towering summit, yet the poem ends with her as a flash of lightning toward the sanctuary that folds away as if it had never shone (verses 11, 14, 20).
  • The letters hāʾ, mīm and thāʾ. The soul's joining to the body is told through single letters: the hāʾ of hubūṭ (descent), the mīm of markaz (centre), the thāʾ of al-thaqīl (the heavy) (verses 6-7).

Lineage 3

Documented transmission: a chain of reading, teaching, translation or citation, grounded in a verified reference or in the later text itself.

Shared source 2

Both draw on a common ancestor by different routes; grounded like a lineage.

  • Ibn ʿArabī, The Interpreter of Desires (Tarjumān al-ashwāq): the effaced abodesSufism · probable

    Both poems take over the opening of the classical Arabic ode, the halt at the ruined encampment and the tears shed there, and use it for a spiritual longing. Neither needs the other: each draws on the desert-ode convention.

    Common ancestor: The nasīb of pre-Islamic and classical Arabic poetry, with its halt and weeping at the ruins (aṭlāl)

    Carried byأطلالaṭlālroot طلل“ruined traces of the encampment”

    In the library:Tarjumān al-ashwāq ¶52Tarjumān al-ashwāq ¶53

  • Plotinus, Enneads IV.8 'On the Descent of the Soul into Bodies', in its Arabic paraphrase (the 'Theology of Aristotle')Neoplatonism · suggestive

    The questions of why the soul came down, whether willingly, and what it gains from the descent are those of Plotinus in Ennead IV.8, which reached Arabic readers in the paraphrase known as the Theology of Aristotle; the Ode shares this Neoplatonic frame while taking its imagery from Arabic poetry. Our library holds Ennead VI.9, where Plotinus asks why the soul does not remain above.

    Common ancestor: Plotinus, Enneads IV.8, transmitted in the Arabic Plotinus paraphrase

    Carried byκάθοδοςkathodos“descent of the soul”

    In the library:Ennead VI.9, ch. 10

Resonance, not influence 6

Resonance, not influence: a structural or thematic likeness. No influence is claimed.

  • Suhrawardī, The Temples of Light: rational souls kept from their worldIshraqi philosophy · probable

    Suhrawardī describes the rational souls as angelic in substance and held back from their own world by bodily occupations, close to the dove held by the snare and barred from the open heights. No particular borrowing from the Ode is claimed.

    Carried by“the soul barred from its own world”

    In the library:Hayākil al-nūr ¶28Hayākil al-nūr ¶27

  • Ibn Ṭufayl, Ḥayy ibn Yaqẓān: the dweller who left the houseFalsafa (Arabic philosophy) · probable

    At the gazelle's death Ḥayy concludes that the one who lived in the body departed before the house fell, leaving the body behind. The Ode's soul likewise sets out and leaves the body 'bound in alliance with the dust'.

    Carried by“the body left behind”

    In the library:Ḥayy (Ibn Ṭufayl) ¶80Ḥayy (Ibn Ṭufayl) ¶81

  • Quran 7:172, the primordial covenant (the 'Day of Alast')Quran and hadith · suggestive

    The Quran speaks of a pledge taken from the children of Adam before their birth, which people may later forget, and the Ode's covenants made in the sanctuary and then forgotten have a similar shape. The poem does not cite the verse, so the link is left as a resemblance.

    Carried byعهدʿahdroot عهد“covenant”

  • Jalāl al-Dīn Rūmī, Masnavī, opening 'Song of the Reed'Persian poetry · probable

    Rūmī's reed flute, cut from its reed-bed, laments its separation and longs to return to its origin, making the soul's exile heard as a voice of mourning as the Ode's dove does. No borrowing is claimed.

    Carried by“lament of separation from the origin”

  • The 'Hymn of the Pearl' in the Acts of ThomasGnosticism · probable

    A prince is sent down from his father's kingdom into Egypt, forgets his origin, and is woken by a letter that flies to him like an eagle. Forgetting in exile and a return that recovers what was lost appear in both texts, and in Suhrawardī's hoopoe with its letter.

    Carried by“forgetting in exile”

    In the library:al-Ghurba al-gharbiyya ¶9

  • William Wordsworth, 'Ode: Intimations of Immortality from Recollections of Early Childhood' (1807)Romanticism · suggestive

    Wordsworth's soul comes from elsewhere 'trailing clouds of glory' and gradually forgets its home as the 'shades of the prison-house' close in. Like Ibn Sīnā's ode, it pairs the soul's descent with forgetting and with the body as a prison.

    Carried by“prison-house; forgetting”

Contrast 2

An instructive opposite: the difference teaches something about both.

  • Plato, Symposium: Diotima's ladder of ascentPlatonism · probable

    Diotima describes only the climb, step by step from beautiful bodies to the beautiful itself, and gives the lover a way up. The Ode dwells on the fall, and even its ascent ends as a flash of lightning that folds away.

    Carried byἐπαναβασμοίepanabasmoi“steps of ascent”

    In the library:Symposium 211cPath: Love: the soul's longing back

  • Early Buddhist teaching on non-self (anattā)Buddhism · probable

    The Ode assumes a single soul that existed above, came down, and can return home knowing more. Early Buddhist teaching explains bondage through craving and denies an abiding self that could make such a journey, so liberation there is no homecoming.

    Carried by“anattā (non-self)”

Claude (opus) via Claude Code, headless, no web access, 2026-09-28. A reference with a check was found and checked with a web search.

16 layers, each with its licence

The original

Ibn Abī Uṣaybiʿa, ʿUyūn al-anbāʾ (Cairo 1299/1882)Ibn Abī Uṣaybiʿa (d. 668/1270), Imruʾ al-Qays ibn al-Ṭaḥḥān (August Müller) · 1299/1882Public domain
By
Ibn Abī Uṣaybiʿa (d. 668/1270) (author of the source that quotes the poem); Imruʾ al-Qays ibn al-Ṭaḥḥān (August Müller) (editor) · 1299/1882
Source:
Ibn Abī Uṣaybiʿa, ʿUyūn al-anbāʾ fī ṭabaqāt al-aṭibbāʾ, ed. Imruʾ al-Qays ibn al-Ṭaḥḥān [A. Müller] (Cairo: al-Maṭbaʿa al-Wahbiyya, 1299/1882), vol. II pp. 10 (vv. 1–19) and 11 (v. 20), PDF pp. 21–22, Bibliotheca Alexandrina scan · link ↗
In the reader:
In full: 20 verses, one per passage, the hemistichs on two lines
Licence:
Public domain (1882)
Notes
In the notice on Ibn Sīnā: «ومن شعر الشيخ الرئيس قال في النفس وهي من أجل قصائده وأشرفها (الكامل)». An edition of the ʿUyūn, not a critical edition of the poem; prints v. 14, which several later printings lack. Printed unvowelled, hemistichs separated by a star.
Amīn (Cairo 1952), v. 1 onlyAḥmad Amīn · 1952UNVERIFIED
By
Aḥmad Amīn (author) · 1952
Source:
Aḥmad Amīn, Ḥayy ibn Yaqẓān li-Ibn Sīnā wa-Ibn Ṭufayl wa-l-Suhrawardī (Cairo 1952): quotes v. 1 only · link ↗
In the reader:
One variant, in the notes (v. 1: Amīn تدلل, the ʿUyūn تعزز)
Licence:
Public domain in Egypt (Amīn d. 1954); US status uncertain
UNVERIFIED:
The US copyright status of Amīn 1952 is uncertain (the text record says so).
ʿUyūn al-anbāʾ, ed. Nizār Riḍā (Beirut 1965)Nizār Riḍā · 1965Copyrighted: cited only
By
Nizār Riḍā (editor) · 1965
Source:
Ibn Abī Uṣaybiʿa, ʿUyūn al-anbāʾ, ed. Nizār Riḍā (Beirut: Dār Maktabat al-Ḥayāt, 1965), p. 446 (mislabelled on archive.org as "1884")
In the reader:
Not shown; not used as a witness
Licence:
In copyright: checked privately only, not reproduced

Our edition

Our transcription of the ʿUyūn textClaude (AI) · 2026-09-28Our work
By
Claude (AI) (two transcription passes from the page images) · 2026-09-28
Source:
data/sources/ayniyya-base.json; text record §§3–5
In the reader:
In full
Licence:
Ours
Made by:
Claude (Opus; exact version not recorded), 2026-09-28 (AI reading of page images; first commit of data/sources/ayniyya-base.json)
Notes
No reading of the print changed. The undotted final yāʾ (فى، التى، وهى، تبكى، تهمى) read as ي; other spelling as printed (الى، اذا، الارفع، شئ; hamza only where printed). 5 doubtful or noteworthy readings listed (v. 4 آنست, v. 7 فاصبحت, v. 14 the extra verse, v. 15 شئ, v. 20 تألق للحمى). No Quran quotation. A person should check the 20 lines against the page image.

Published translations

Browne's English versionBrowne · UNVERIFIEDUNVERIFIED
By
Browne (translator) · UNVERIFIED
Source:
Browne: named in the text record as a published English version; not checked
In the reader:
Not shown
Licence:
In copyright or not checked (the text record does not decide); not reproduced
UNVERIFIED:
Browne's full citation, date and copyright status are not recorded in the repo.
Arberry's English versionArberry · UNVERIFIEDUNVERIFIED
By
Arberry (translator) · UNVERIFIED
Source:
Arberry: named in the text record as a published English version; not checked
In the reader:
Not shown
Licence:
In copyright or not checked (the text record does not decide); not reproduced
UNVERIFIED:
Arberry's full citation, date and copyright status are not recorded in the repo.

AI layers

Vowelling (every vowel supplied by AI)Claude (AI) · 2026-09-28Our work
By
Claude (AI) (vowelling) · 2026-09-28
In the reader:
Every vowel mark is AI (mask 'a'); doubtful words marked
Licence:
Ours; marked AI
Made by:
Claude (Opus; exact version not recorded), 2026-09-28 (first commit of app/src/data/ayniyya.json (scripts/recitals/prepare.py ayniyya: headless Claude Code, Opus; letters verified unchanged))
Notes
The print is unvowelled: prepare.py supplied all 697 marks, letters verified unchanged; 47 ambiguous words listed. The metre check suggests a slip at v. 4 (آنَسَتْ, where al-kāmil wants أَنِسَتْ).
English translation, passage by passageClaude (AI) · 2026-09-28Our work
By
Claude (AI) (translator) · 2026-09-28
In the reader:
Under each passage
Licence:
Ours; marked AI
Made by:
Claude (Opus; exact version not recorded), 2026-09-28 (first commit of app/src/content/ai/ayniyya.json (scripts/recitals/translate.py ayniyya opus: headless Claude Code, minimal context))
Notes
Written for this reader from the Arabic (our vowelled text), with the glossary in data/sources/ayniyya-meta.json; the model was told not to reproduce or imitate published translations (Corbin/Trask, Goichon, Heath, Thackston, Azal, Hussain, Beneito & Hirtenstein, Austin, Nicholson, Chittick) and was given none.
Word glossesClaude (AI) · 2026-09-28Our work
By
Claude (AI) (glosses) · 2026-09-28
In the reader:
One gloss per word, in the sense the passage gives it (word panel, and under the words on request)
Licence:
Ours; marked AI
Made by:
Claude (Opus; exact version not recorded), 2026-09-28 (first commit of app/src/content/ai/ayniyya.json (scripts/recitals/translate.py ayniyya opus: headless Claude Code, minimal context))
Notes
Contextual glosses (1–5 words) for every word id, from the same run as the translation.
Term notesClaude (AI) · 2026-09-28Our work
By
Claude (AI) (notes) · 2026-09-28
In the reader:
Up to six technical terms per passage, each with a one-sentence note, on the word
Licence:
Ours; marked AI
Made by:
Claude (Opus; exact version not recorded), 2026-09-28 (first commit of app/src/content/ai/ayniyya.json (scripts/recitals/translate.py ayniyya opus: headless Claude Code, minimal context))
Notes
From the same run as the translation, with the glossary in data/sources/ayniyya-meta.json.
Resonances: themes and connectionsClaude (AI) · 2026-09-28Our work
By
Claude (AI) (map of themes and connections, by docs/RESONANCES-METHOD.md) · 2026-09-28
In the reader:
For the whole text: themes and 13 connections, on the About page
Licence:
Ours; marked AI
Made by:
Claude (Opus; exact version not recorded), 2026-09-28 (generatedOn of content/resonances/ayniyya.json (Claude Code, headless, no web access))
Notes
Every connection states its kind; parallels are resonances, not claims of influence. External references were proposed by the model without web access and are shown only after an agent verified them with a web search.

Automatic analysis

Word analysis (CAMeL Tools)CAMeL Tools 1.6 (NYU Abu Dhabi) · 2026-09-28Our work
By
CAMeL Tools 1.6 (NYU Abu Dhabi) (analyser: calima-msa-r13 + MLE, constrained by the text's vowelling) · 2026-09-28
Source:
scripts/fusus/analyze.py → data/sources/ayniyya-analysis.json · link ↗
In the reader:
Lemma, root, part of speech, clitics and pattern, in the word panel
Licence:
Our analysis layer, made offline with CAMeL Tools (code MIT; calima-msa-r13 database GPL v2, not redistributed)
Notes
192 words, 131 with a root, 15 vowel conflicts with the AI vowelling. Automatic and non-generative; date = first commit of the analysis file.
Quran quotations found automaticallyscripts/quran_refs.py · 2026-09-28Our work
By
scripts/quran_refs.py (skeleton matcher against the Tanzil Uthmani text) · 2026-09-28
Source:
app/src/data/quran-refs/ayniyya.json
In the reader:
None found
Licence:
Ours
Notes
Quotations verified when the text was established, plus an automatic match on the consonantal skeleton (vowels, Quranic marks, alif spellings and hamza seats ignored): a run of four or more words, or three words of at least 12 letters. No AI.
Metre scansionscripts/metre/arud.py · 2026-10-03Our work
By
scripts/metre/arud.py (rule-based scanner (al-Khalīl's ʿarūḍ, as set out by Ibn Jinnī)) · 2026-10-03
Source:
app/src/content/metre/ayniyya.json (scripts/metre/build.py)
In the reader:
The metre line under each verse: al-kāmil, 19 of 20 verses scanned
Licence:
Ours
Notes
Reads the AI vowelling, so the scansion also checks it; never guesses. v. 4 fits al-kāmil only if the verb is read anisat (a likely slip in the vowelling), with a note written by hand. Date = first commit of the metre file.

Audio

Arabic read aloud (machine voice)ar-SA-HamedNeural (Azure AI Speech) · 2026-09-28Our work
By
ar-SA-HamedNeural (Azure AI Speech) (machine voice) · 2026-09-28
In the reader:
Each passage, word by word highlighted
Licence:
Ours; generated on Azure's paid tier, whose terms allow the audio output to be published
Made by:
ar-SA-HamedNeural (Azure AI Speech), 2026-09-28 (first commit of app/src/data/ayniyya-audio.json)
Notes
Machine voice reading the vowelled text (including the AI vowels); a reading aid, not a recitation.
English read aloud (machine voice)en-GB-RyanNeural (Azure AI Speech) · 2026-09-28Our work
By
en-GB-RyanNeural (Azure AI Speech) (machine voice) · 2026-09-28
In the reader:
Each passage, word by word highlighted
Licence:
Ours; generated on Azure's paid tier, whose terms allow the audio output to be published
Made by:
en-GB-RyanNeural (Azure AI Speech), 2026-09-28 (first commit of app/src/data/ayniyya-audio-en.json)
Notes
Machine voice reading the AI English translation; a reading aid.

✦ marks AI that no person has reviewed yet; ✧ marks AI reviewed by a named person. Copyrighted works are cited, never shown. All sources · How texts are established

Our working notes on this edition: status, witnesses, the decisions taken and why, and what AI supplied. This is a working edition, not an authority.Show the notes
Work / author / datesal-Qaṣīda al-ʿayniyya (القصيدة العينية), also called Qaṣīdat al-nafs ("The Ode on the Soul"), incipit «هبطت إليك من المحل الأرفع» · Abū ʿAlī al-Ḥusayn Ibn Sīnā (370–428 AH / 980–1037 CE) · metre kāmil, rhyme -ʿi
Part addedWhole poem: 20 verses in the base (some later printings have 19 or 21)
Reader route/read/ayniyya (proposed; not registered in the app) · apparatus /read/ayniyya/notes (proposed)
Statusworking edition established 28 Sept 2026 from one PD print (steps 2–9, 11) · reviewed by: —

The soul, likened to a grey dove (warqāʾ), descends unwillingly from the loftiest station into the body (the "desolate ruin"), forgets its old home, weeps over the traces, is held by the "dense snare" and the cage, and at death sees what eyes cannot see and returns; the poem ends by asking why it was sent down and answers: to hear what it had not heard and to know every hidden thing. Commentaries exist (e.g. by Fakhr al-Dīn al-Māridīnī, d. 594/1198, noted by Ibn Abī Uṣaybiʿa; al-Munāwī; Dāwūd al-Anṭākī): none collated yet.

1. Witnesses

SiglumWitnessKindVowelled?LicenceLocation
UIbn Abī Uṣaybiʿa (d. 668/1270), ʿUyūn al-anbāʾ fī ṭabaqāt al-aṭibbāʾ, ed. Imruʾ al-Qays ibn al-Ṭaḥḥān (= August Müller), Cairo: al-Maṭbaʿa al-Wahbiyya, 1299/1882, vol. II pp. 10–11 (notice on Ibn Sīnā): «ومن شعر الشيخ الرئيس قال في النفس وهي من أجل قصائده وأشرفها (الكامل)».standard ed. of a source that quotes the poem in fullnoPD (1882)archive.org AAlexandrina-165332 (Bibliotheca Alexandrina scan), PDF pp. 21–22
AAḥmad Amīn, Ḥayy ibn Yaqẓān li-Ibn Sīnā wa-Ibn Ṭufayl wa-l-Suhrawardī (Cairo 1952): quotes v. 1 only.studylightlyPD in Egypt; US uncertainarchive.org quran99yaai_gmail_201710 (scan and OCR)
(B)ʿUyūn al-anbāʾ, ed. Nizār Riḍā, Beirut: Dār Maktabat al-Ḥayāt, 1965, p. 446. Mislabelled on archive.org as "1884" (euyun-alanba-fi-tabaqat-alatibaa): it is the modern typeset edition.modern ed.no©checked privately only; not used as a witness
—Mehren, Traités mystiques: not verified whether any fascicle prints the ode (the local PDFs have no usable Arabic text layer; TODO: check the fascicles' contents pages). Other PD prints (Cairo majmūʿas, Carra de Vaux's text in JA 1899, Browne's Literary History) not located or not checked.

2. Base and why

U is the only openly usable full print found: public domain, an early and widely used source, and the place where the poem is transmitted within Ibn Sīnā's biography. It is an edition of the ʿUyūn, not a critical edition of the poem; it prints 20 verses including «وبدت تغرد فوق ذروة شاهق * والعلم يرفع كل من لم يرفع» (v. 14), which several later printings lack.

3. Collation

None beyond A's v. 1 (one substantive difference: A تدلل, U تعزز). A second full PD witness is wanted (see §12).

4. Decisions

No reading of U was changed. Mechanical: the Egyptian print's undotted final yāʾ (فى، التى، وهى، تبكى، تهمى) is read as ي; other spelling kept as printed (الى، اذا، الارفع، شئ; hamza only where printed). Doubtful or noteworthy readings kept and listed in ayniyya-base.json → uncertain: v. 4 آنست (madda printed; usually أَنِسَتْ), v. 7 فاصبحت, v. 14 (the extra verse), v. 15 شئ, v. 20 تألق للحمى (usually بالحمى).

5. Quotations

No Quran quotation; the universal skeleton matcher (run privately in scratch, see the report) finds none.

6. Vowelling

U is unvowelled: every vowel is AI-supplied (scripts/recitals/prepare.py, letters verified unchanged), vowelMask 'a'.

7. Segmentation and word IDs

One verse per passage (1–20), hemistichs separated by a line break. Word IDs e1:<verse>:<token>.

8. Analysis layer

CAMeL Tools via scripts/fusus/analyze.py ayniyya.json ayniyya-analysis.json e1.

10. Translation

AI (scripts/recitals/translate.py ayniyya opus), marked AI. Published English versions (e.g. Browne, Arberry) are © or not checked; none reproduced.

11. Rights

U: PD. B (Beirut 1965): © — not reproduced.

12. Open questions / to review

  • A second full PD witness: a pre-1930 Cairo print of the ode (e.g. in a majmūʿa or with a commentary), or a manuscript scan; then collate.
  • A person to check the 20 lines against the page image (two transcription passes done by Claude).
  • The ode's attribution to Ibn Sīnā has been questioned in modern scholarship; record if a lens or note needs it.

13. Change log

  • 2026-09-28: record created; base U transcribed from page images (two passes), ayniyya-base.json, ayniyya-meta.json; prepare.py (20/20 vowelled, 697 AI marks, 47 ambiguous words listed), analyze.py (192 words, 131 with root, 15 vowel conflicts), translate.py … opus (20/20).