| Work / author / dates | al-Qaṣīda al-ʿayniyya (القصيدة العينية), also called Qaṣīdat al-nafs ("The Ode on the Soul"), incipit «هبطت إليك من المحل الأرفع» · Abū ʿAlī al-Ḥusayn Ibn Sīnā (370–428 AH / 980–1037 CE) · metre kāmil, rhyme -ʿi |
| Part added | Whole poem: 20 verses in the base (some later printings have 19 or 21) |
| Reader route | /read/ayniyya (proposed; not registered in the app) · apparatus /read/ayniyya/notes (proposed) |
| Status | working edition established 28 Sept 2026 from one PD print (steps 2–9, 11) · reviewed by: — |
The soul, likened to a grey dove (warqāʾ), descends unwillingly from the loftiest station into the body (the "desolate ruin"), forgets its old home, weeps over the traces, is held by the "dense snare" and the cage, and at death sees what eyes cannot see and returns; the poem ends by asking why it was sent down and answers: to hear what it had not heard and to know every hidden thing. Commentaries exist (e.g. by Fakhr al-Dīn al-Māridīnī, d. 594/1198, noted by Ibn Abī Uṣaybiʿa; al-Munāwī; Dāwūd al-Anṭākī): none collated yet.
1. Witnesses
| Siglum | Witness | Kind | Vowelled? | Licence | Location |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| U | Ibn Abī Uṣaybiʿa (d. 668/1270), ʿUyūn al-anbāʾ fī ṭabaqāt al-aṭibbāʾ, ed. Imruʾ al-Qays ibn al-Ṭaḥḥān (= August Müller), Cairo: al-Maṭbaʿa al-Wahbiyya, 1299/1882, vol. II pp. 10–11 (notice on Ibn Sīnā): «ومن شعر الشيخ الرئيس قال في النفس وهي من أجل قصائده وأشرفها (الكامل)». | standard ed. of a source that quotes the poem in full | no | PD (1882) | archive.org AAlexandrina-165332 (Bibliotheca Alexandrina scan), PDF pp. 21–22 |
| A | Aḥmad Amīn, Ḥayy ibn Yaqẓān li-Ibn Sīnā wa-Ibn Ṭufayl wa-l-Suhrawardī (Cairo 1952): quotes v. 1 only. | study | lightly | PD in Egypt; US uncertain | archive.org quran99yaai_gmail_201710 (scan and OCR) |
| (B) | ʿUyūn al-anbāʾ, ed. Nizār Riḍā, Beirut: Dār Maktabat al-Ḥayāt, 1965, p. 446. Mislabelled on archive.org as "1884" (euyun-alanba-fi-tabaqat-alatibaa): it is the modern typeset edition. | modern ed. | no | © | checked privately only; not used as a witness |
| — | Mehren, Traités mystiques: not verified whether any fascicle prints the ode (the local PDFs have no usable Arabic text layer; TODO: check the fascicles' contents pages). Other PD prints (Cairo majmūʿas, Carra de Vaux's text in JA 1899, Browne's Literary History) not located or not checked. |
2. Base and why
U is the only openly usable full print found: public domain, an early and widely used source, and the place where the poem is transmitted within Ibn Sīnā's biography. It is an edition of the ʿUyūn, not a critical edition of the poem; it prints 20 verses including «وبدت تغرد فوق ذروة شاهق * والعلم يرفع كل من لم يرفع» (v. 14), which several later printings lack.
3. Collation
None beyond A's v. 1 (one substantive difference: A تدلل, U تعزز). A second full PD witness is wanted (see §12).
4. Decisions
No reading of U was changed. Mechanical: the Egyptian print's undotted final yāʾ (فى، التى، وهى، تبكى، تهمى) is read as ي; other spelling kept as printed (الى، اذا، الارفع، شئ; hamza only where printed). Doubtful or noteworthy readings kept and listed in ayniyya-base.json → uncertain: v. 4 آنست (madda printed; usually أَنِسَتْ), v. 7 فاصبحت, v. 14 (the extra verse), v. 15 شئ, v. 20 تألق للحمى (usually بالحمى).
5. Quotations
No Quran quotation; the universal skeleton matcher (run privately in scratch, see the report) finds none.
6. Vowelling
U is unvowelled: every vowel is AI-supplied (scripts/recitals/prepare.py, letters verified unchanged), vowelMask 'a'.
7. Segmentation and word IDs
One verse per passage (1–20), hemistichs separated by a line break. Word IDs e1:<verse>:<token>.
8. Analysis layer
CAMeL Tools via scripts/fusus/analyze.py ayniyya.json ayniyya-analysis.json e1.
10. Translation
AI (scripts/recitals/translate.py ayniyya opus), marked AI. Published English versions (e.g. Browne, Arberry) are © or not checked; none reproduced.
11. Rights
U: PD. B (Beirut 1965): © — not reproduced.
12. Open questions / to review
- A second full PD witness: a pre-1930 Cairo print of the ode (e.g. in a majmūʿa or with a commentary), or a manuscript scan; then collate.
- A person to check the 20 lines against the page image (two transcription passes done by Claude).
- The ode's attribution to Ibn Sīnā has been questioned in modern scholarship; record if a lens or note needs it.
13. Change log
- 2026-09-28: record created; base U transcribed from page images (two passes),
ayniyya-base.json,ayniyya-meta.json;prepare.py(20/20 vowelled, 697 AI marks, 47 ambiguous words listed),analyze.py(192 words, 131 with root, 15 vowel conflicts),translate.py … opus(20/20).